So this is my first FanFic. It's about a girl who really likes Tay. I'm not that good at English, so I'm sorry for it.
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I was riding my beautiful white horse Lucky, I guess I gave him that name because I felt very lucky when I was riding him. It was the day before my freshman year started. I wasn't so excited. I knew it will be the same story again. No friends, no boyfriend, nothing. Just another boring year, like every other. I didn't have friends so I didn't miss anyone.
When I walked in my lovely house my mom was watching another of her romantic movies. She always cried when she watched them. It made me smile.
- Honey?! Is that you? - she said, still crying.
- Yes, mom.
- Drew called you, the nice guy from the summer camp. Right?
- Oh. 'Key, I'll call him later.
So, I was sitting in front of my computer and listening to Taylor Swift. I was thinking, why the hell was he calling me? I had to figure out. I took my mobile phone and called him.
- Yes? - it was his beautiful voice.
- Hey it's me Amanda. Remember? - I knew he did.
- Oh. I called to tell you that you forgot the Taylor Swift CD you bought. I'm going to the same school as you now. Do you want that I bring it to school tomorrow?
- Yes, great! I was searching for it all the time.
- Ok, bye.
- Bye. - I said and he hanged-up.
I watched at my Taylor posters all the time. "How cool would it be to meet her." I thought to myself over, and over, and over again...
I always waked up earlier just to check if Taylor bandaids got updated. It usually was, but today not. So I went to the kitchen and ate some cheerios. I went back to my room. I pulled on my most confident clothes, a yellow dress and cowboy boots. I didn't like any other shoes.
I walked in to school and there Drew was.
- Hi. Here are your CD's. - he said and pulled out two CD's from his school bag.
- Thanks. What's your first class? - As I asked he looked around all the time.
- I...
- What's wrong? - a word wasn't going out from he's mouth so I spoke. - What?!
- Oh, oh. Maths. Sorry I was searching Alison. Did you see her?
- Who is Alison?
- I didn't tell you? That's my new girlfriend.
I opened my eyes wide, I couldn't open them wider...
I liked him very much. The last words made me cry. He didn't saw me crying. He saw her. Before I could waste another tear he kissed her. I turned away.
When I got home I trowed all of my books on the floor and went to Lucky. I was angry and sad, too. I wasn't thinking of anything I was just riding Lucky. I singed "Fifteen" by Taylor Swift. It always made me smile.
The phone rang as I was laying on my bed.
- Hello. - I said slowly.
- Hey Am it's Drew. Alison broke up with me... Well it doesn't matter I wanted to tell you that I... I, I... - he sounded like he would cry.
- What?!
Great start! I'm fascinated to find out how this story will continue. You have so many songs incorporated, I wonder if one will be one more dominant than the other.
I loved how you had Taylor Bandaids incorporated! That was awesome!
And thanks for posting. I'm glad to see that the Fan Fiction forum is off to a good start
- What?! - I said.
- I've go to hang-up. - and he did without telling me "bye".
After these word I felt like an alone flower beside the sidewalk of an empty street. I realized it's not the end of the world. A hundred questions in my head: "Why did Alison break up with such a cute guy?", "Why didn't he tell a word anymore?" and the most important one: "Do I love him?". My stomach started to hurt, it felt like a world war in me. I knew which emotion that was. Like my mind answered my last question "yes!!!". I felt a little numb, but almost better. Now, I know I love him. One question is answered, but now I have two more: "What should I tell him?" and "Does he love me?". I didn't want to figure that out. If he did I would be in a relationship, that would last a month or two and we wouldn't be friends anymore. I didn't want that. I wanted to be with him till I die. Lovers or not I wanted him to be mine forever.
That night I dreamed of a princess and a prince. They were looking at each other, fully in love. In a second their hair became white and they looked older and older. Still looking each other. It looked like their love last forever. In a second darkness and I woke up.
I knew it wasn't a dream. It was scary, so it was a nightmare, but a beautiful one. My mind, surely, wanted to tell that this love makes me blind. There are greater things in life then a lifelong relationship with the boy next door. But I know I need him, not forever but just for now.
It was Tuesday. I stood up and took the blue dress that was on my chair. I jumped in my boots and I ran. I didn't have time to brush my wavy brown hair. I just looked at the window. It was raining but I didn't care about it.
I saw him in front of his house holding a umbrella. I ran to him. As I ran I pushed him a little bit. And the umbrella was already down on the street. I just looked at him and in one second my lips were on his.
Someone was walking behind my back as I was kissing him. It was Alison's voice:
- Lucky you.
I knew I was the luckiest girl in the world in this moment.
"White Horse" was playing somewhere.
Lucky, that's what I am and always will be.
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I've thought of this as the end it's very happy. But should I write more?
What do you think of this FanFic?
I already have another in my notebook it's called "Touch The Stars".
What should I do?
Great start! I'm fascinated to find out how this story will continue. You have so many songs incorporated, I wonder if one will be one more dominant than the other.
I loved how you had Taylor Bandaids incorporated! That was awesome!
And thanks for posting. I'm glad to see that the Fan Fiction forum is off to a good start
Thx, at the end I guess "Fearless" dominated, you know the part:
"And I don't know why but with you
I'd dance in a storm in my best dress
Fearless"
You could continue, but if you do that only to make it last longer, then that's a bad idea. If you have ideas for it to continue, then go for it. Just don't make it long just because you think you should
And don't feel bad about people not reading it. TSB is still starting up; it may take a bit longer for the fan fiction section to get up and running. Stay positive. You can post your other too. I'm sure people will be interested in it soon enough
I'm a little confused at who's talking at points, but good!
Oh, sorry. In moments of writing it I lived it. I just thinked about things happening in the story
I lived that story.
Well and I'm gonna post "Touch The Stars" tomorrow. And I'm already thinking about a new FanFic that is a little bit more about me in that story you'll find out why did I choose Denny'sRose for the nickname here. I guess I'll call it "Nothing But The Truth".
Hmm and should I post those new FanFics in new threads. Because people are going to be confused when I write them in this thread. What should I do?
Woah, what a fresh start Denny Love the way your story goes
Good thing Adam and Alison broke up,, go girl
Hey thx. Sorry if you didn't understand something it was Drew not Adam. Call them like you like it. I just took the name of the guy she mentions in "Teardrops On My Guitar". And my real name is Sanya, my nickname is Roxie, but I used the nickname Denny'sRose, just because I like a boy called like that
But thanks so much for reading my 1st FanFic. Thanks so much to all of you
Lucky
Love the way your story goes 
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